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2nd portfolio: still life by *frillion:iconfrillion:


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Submitted: November 11, 2007
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Make: Panasonic
Model: DMC-FX30
Shutter Speed: 10/80 second
F Number: F/4.3
Focal Length: 10 mm
ISO Speed: 200
Date Picture Taken: Nov 9, 2005, 7:47:52 PM

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Well, I ain't done with this yet, but I want comments before I continue.

What should i put at the background...cuz i think that meh floor's too...boring...

Done with charcoal, sketched with mechanical pencil
this is for applying to college...MRRRRHMMMM....

it's meh love/hate converse...I love them very much...
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i love those shoes. they're so cool. haha great job! :)
love/hate them? xD

lovely shading. comes off as dramatic. i think you shouldn't put in a background. Just a lot heavy shadowing.

Or you could add more stuff on the floor, then put in the floor... but make sure the shoes still stand out and are in focus.

critique: why is there a tiny bar inside the hate shoe? o.o (or is that a tag? you must clarify) something about your hate shoe's angle makes it seem it got squashed before you drew it. >.>"

asides that though... like i said, fabulous shading and equally fabulous details.

YOU CAN DO IT CAM

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ay shokoy.
Great shading here. Especially on the shadow beneath them- I find lots of people neglect shadows that are cast by the subject and the way you've done it here really gives the shoes a context to exist in.

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visit me? ~thelanithro
You should call this THE Shoe. Because it's not just any shoe. Better yet, will anyone put up a shoe brand THE Shoe please?
*laughs--by myself*

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